The Centre of the Earth is an Attraction
As you may or may not have read below, depends on how often you stop by, I did actually win NaNoWriMo last year. 50,000 words in a month. It’s amazing what the brain can do if you force it to think hour after hour fueled with diet coke, snickers and Nine Inch Nail - Year Zero to help.
Anyway, I did say I wasn’t going to show anyone until I’d edited it and re-written parts etc etc. But, now I’ve read it through myself, it’s a bit simple plot-wise, the characters are thin and it’s interspersed with random gibberish as I fell asleep at my keyboard.
To that end, I’ve put it online in the hopes that someone will read it and offer me any feedback - should I edit it and rewrite parts? Is it worth spending the time? Did I waste many precious hours on a blithering bucket of bilious carbuncles? (Actually, the answer to the last question I already know, no, I didn’t waste any time, I thoroughly enjoyed doing it.).
So, click the link below, have a read and let me know what you think … please!









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